Thanks folks for the comments.

(Looking at it again, I think it needs another `them` stanza with that `us` one separately tagged on as a finisher)

Ah, well, if the inspiration strikes again - who knows?

Thanks again.

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The care in this construction is evident...leading to a
most satisfying conclusion. Unusual, and all the more
rewarding for that.
Ira Gershwin would have appreciated this format for the
musical stage, that much is apparent from his own skill
in word play found in his book about lyric writing.

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Beautifully crafted, Harry!

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Betjeman-esque, Harry.
Your intro reminded me of a tasteless joke I know about a Baptist Minister castigating
a-he-ing and a-she-ing,
and a-he-ing and a-he-ing,
and a-she-ing and a-she-ing
and a-me-ing and a-me-ing.

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A radically re-cast re-post

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