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Aviva Rifka Bhandari

Tue 8th Jun 2021 00:00

Thank you Stephen, Leon, and Nigel for your comments

Leon the poem would suit a caring foster home too, or a shelter, but in this case it was a hospital ward (details noted at base of previous poem 'Naomi and I')

Nigel I am particularly good at remembering where things happen, such a conversation was in the hallway..., such a person was sat on the sofa when they said...., this is the bus stop where I thought up that song/dance/game etc.. sometimes it can be refreshing to be somewhere that there aren't memories already floating about, but other times it is really nice to recollect some things so clearly.

Thanks also to everyone who has clicked 'Like' for this poem

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Nigel Astell

Mon 7th Jun 2021 19:45

a space once filled is still
now it holds a memory.

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Mon 7th Jun 2021 19:26

Suggests a foster home?

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Stephen Atkinson

Mon 7th Jun 2021 18:04

Both moving, and beautiful ?

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