Brian, thanks for the comments. That beer and ciggie tasted really good :-) x

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Hi jeff, thanks ever so much for commenting on open-mic virgin, I'm glad you enjoyed it, I had great fun writing it, one of those off the cuff ones from a head full of new thoughts and experiences. Hope it performs well, and I don't fall flat on my face. :-)

Take care, Nicky x

Comment is about JEFF.W (poet profile)

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Hi Steve, thanks for the comment on open-mic virgin. Read at the Howcroft last Sunday, great experience, hopefully go again next time or may try the Tudor next, reasonably local to me in Bolton.

Wanted to put a comment up about 'The Taleban are Skitting Me Nan', but considering I work with asylum seekers and refugees, thought it may be a little politically incorrect of me. Thought it was a very clever and humourous poem though. I enjoyed it.

Nicky x

Comment is about stephen smith (poet profile)

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Tommy, should I back off? I'm never sure anymore whether we are laughing together, or whether I am actually being obscure or even cruel.

By the way, you're right to prod me: i must get some samples up to be eligible for POM (assuming I want to be}

Comment is about Tommy Carroll (poet profile)

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Hi again
A bucket list? Maybe. But there are certain elements that I might look forward to more than the others.
I'll leave you to figure out which
Steve M

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

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Oops - thanks Steve
A

Comment is about Alan McKean (poet profile)

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Hi Alan
Don't know whether I'm teaching egg-sucking, but I noticed that you answered Gus and Cynthia on your own blog.
The norm is for you to answer onto their own Profile section, that way they know what you want to say in reply, without them having to look back at your poem again
:-)

Comment is about Alan McKean (poet profile)

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Thanks for thanks Tommy. 'Let n be unconfined!'

Comment is about Barrie Singleton (poet profile)

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Hi Nicky, ta for the navigation tips! Jo :)

Comment is about Nicky Burrows (poet profile)

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hi there joshua thanks for taking the time to read "what is love" poem i see it has intrigued you. the answer to your question about what type of love is entirely upto the person reading it has i'd written it so that it gave the reader an option of how they would interpret it and to make you think about it :-) (i hope that clears it up) :)
i enjoyed reading your samples of poems :)

Comment is about Joshua Van-Cook (poet profile)

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hi there rodney thanks for your comments i'm sure am still alive and well :) ref: memories poem :)
enjoy reading your poems :)

Comment is about Rodney Wood (poet profile)

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hi there jeffers!
thanks for the comments on the poems i've written upto now sorry for the long delay more will be coming :) enjoying your performances great work! :-)

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

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Moi also on the vanilla front.
I shall be partaking of the experience later today

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

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Hi Stephen
Thanks so much for your comment on "A Day in the Life". I have spend plenty of time on the road over the last few years, and somehow this all came together the other night.
A very descriptive summation

Take care

Comment is about stephen smith (poet profile)

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Twas my first, Gus. Lost it to the Howcroft! Will always hold fond memories.

So your a dutchman then? lol.

Thanks for commenting. Nicky x

Comment is about Gus Jonsson (poet profile)

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Hi Gus
I truly appreciate the comment.
I used it as a kind of verbal dyno-rod. Silly little thought, but sometimes (too often) the brain goes into 'off' mode, and needs a gentle nudge.
I also love!! a vanilla slice

Comment is about Gus Jonsson (poet profile)

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Thank you B! It took a dozen readings to get it 'nose' 'power of' 'N' LOL very good.

Comment is about Barrie Singleton (poet profile)

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Hi, i just want to say thanks for your help and comments on my poetry. It was very much appreciated. Don't know where you been lately but hope you're well. :-)

I'm going off the net for a while so good luck with all that you do. Take care,

Janet.x

Comment is about Anthony Emmerson (poet profile)

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Hi John, i just want to say thanks for your comments on some of my poems. Going to be off-line for a while, things to do, people to see etc.... :-)

Love reading your poetry and hope it will long continue for you.

Janet.x

Comment is about John Darwin (poet profile)

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Hi Cynthia, i just want to say thanks for your encouragement and your assistance when commenting on my work.
It really has been very helpful and is appreciated.

I'm off-line for a while but will most likely be back in the new year.

Janet.x

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

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Hi Isobel,
just want to say thanks for your support and comments on my poetry. I'm going to be an absent friend on wol too for a short while so i wish you well with your own work and will most likely see you at an event.

Janet.x

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

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Hi Nicky, just want to say thankyou for your encouragement and fantastic comments on my poetry. I'm going to be off-line for a short while.

Love your latest poems by the way. The performance virgin is just great! :-)
Janet.x

Comment is about Nicky Burrows (poet profile)

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Hi Andy, just want to say thanks for all your encouragement. I'll be off-line for a while but might see you soon somewhere.
Janet.x

Comment is about Andy N (poet profile)

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thanks for commenting on 'for silence' nicky.. bit off a odd one that one as it sort off wrote itself.. don't know where it came from literally!

Comment is about Nicky Burrows (poet profile)

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yeah, for silence is a sad un! not sure where that came from! came out off no-where somehow..thanks for commenting!

Comment is about Cate (poet profile)

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'Tumescent'. Brilliant!

Still haven't a clue what it's about...but the wordsmithery is admirable.

: )

Jx

Comment is about John Darwin (poet profile)

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Hi Jeff
Thanks for taking the time etc
It was nice to sort of meet you last week (is a nod a 'meeting'), and I look forward to having the time to chat next time

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

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Hi Cynthia, as I have said before I enjoy the criticism of my writing, what you have to say is constructive and I don't take offense at it at all. Sometimes one can get too close to a piece, and miss mistakes and errors, or make mistakes in typing - I am sure that I am computer dyslexic!! haha. Think I mentioned before that I can spot grammatical stakes at a hundred paces in the work of others but when it comes to my own I think they hide and take cover.

Nicky x

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

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thanks very much for your input John. I have settled on 'tumescent' its several meanings work for me in that context.

thanks again

John

Comment is about John Aikman (poet profile)

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Hi John, John here. (I was in the Estate agents recently and out of the five people in the office, four of them were called John. When I told them I had an appointment with John they all groaned). When I was 10, many years ago, John was the most popular name for boys, I don't think it's even in the top 20 now. Funny how names will end up dating you. In 20 years time 'clairvoyant hoaxsters' will be closing their eyes and touching their temples and saying' is anybody here missing a John?' and a whole bunch of blue-rinsers will start waving their arms about. : )

Anyway, that's not why I called....in fact I've completely forgotten why I did pop in...oh yes, couldn't 'copulant', which we both agree isn't really a word (although it does have minor usage in fertility sciences when discussing the fusion of gametes) become 'corpulent'?

I rather like the idea of a corpulent brillianteened quiff.

JMHO
: )

Jx
PS I was born in the North and now live in the south, we may have crossed on the journey.

Comment is about John Darwin (poet profile)

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I have read that the moral fibre of the English working class is a world on to itself, an arguable statement, of course, but still very evident in modern English society.

Your 'samples' are marvellous.

Comment is about Tommy Carroll (poet profile)

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Hi Jeff, hope you are rested after your Busjking for Beer tour. Shame the New Brighton leg couldn't, in the end, take place, but hey, that's rock'n'roll. It was good to see you at the Bards. Come again. Thanks for leaving your comment on my "He wasn't gay, but ..." poem / monologue.

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

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why sad?

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

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I am so sorry Winston that I made you sad with my Poem,

Relationships with people or anything else that one needs in life to get by are never easy,

However today I am happy that you read my poem and liked it,

What more could a girl ask for?.

Thank you
Augsta x

Comment is about Winston Plowes (poet profile)

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Hello John, thanks for taking the time to comment on my poem 'letter to a genius'. It was a bit of an experiment for me. If you look at my other stuff most of it is fairly transparent. It was primarily the sound of the words I was after and hopefully it works on that level. 'Copulant' is not actually a recognised word, unless I have just invented it! Now considering whether I will replace it although I rarely revise anything once its's finished. I haven't had time to look at your stuff properly yet, I only have access at work, hence this early message before the boss gets in!

cheers
John

PS I was born in St Albans although I have been in the north most of my life, my brother still lives there

Comment is about John Aikman (poet profile)

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Thank you Cate for taking the time to read and comment
on my poem 'Out of the darkness...'
Yes, sad and reflective... a longing to escape...
to be free...

Moi x

Comment is about Cate (poet profile)

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Thank you so much Nicky for your lovely comments on my poem
'Out of the darkness...'
Made my day : )

Have been so busy and overwhelmed lately...
Never enough time to get caught up on the blogs here!

Moi x

Comment is about Nicky Burrows (poet profile)

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Merci toujours Gus pour tout de ton apprentissage ; )
J'ai fait quelques changements à mon poème 'Out of the darkness...'
j'aimais bien ce que tu as proposé, mais pour moi ça changeait un peu
trop le sens...

Moi x

Comment is about Gus Jonsson (poet profile)

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Thank you Josh for taking the time to read and comment on my poem
'Out of the darkness...'
I am glad it works well for you, because I never really know how people
are going to interpret...

Comment is about Joshua Van-Cook (poet profile)

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No worries Nicky, glad I could help, look forward to revised version. Surprised you've been reprimanded for colourful language, seen and heard far worse lol, hope to see you soon - in detention for the poor spelling! Jeff X

Comment is about Nicky Burrows (poet profile)

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Cheers Jeff, loved the feedback and intend to spice it up, have two versions, one of them may not go down too well with some people, have already been reprimanded for colourful language. Need I say more?

Thanks for the pointer on the 'typo' - missed that one- ha! you wouldn't believe that I can teach English, get flailed for mis-homophoning!x

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

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Sign of a good actress Isobel? lol x

Comment is about Isobel (poet profile)

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Hello there. Just wanted to thank you for your whole hearted support of WOLOP - I keep coming across little comments you have left and it all helps. I sometimes wonder if it might be more successful spear headed by someone less controversial.... Perhaps you could take it over one day if it doesn't keel over and die this month - not that I'm trying to divest at all - there isn't much admin to it - I would just like it to be successful. Food for thought anyway.
Isobel x

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

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Thanks for your comments on 'that' poem. It is one that I will never perform - but it served its purpose at the time. Thanks for organising the Busking for Beer - I really enjoyed all the venues I was able to get along to. I guess you will be relieved to relax now and start writing more. I'll look forward to reading it. See yous around. xx

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

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Thanks Val, really enjoyed the night. Lovely, genuine welcome from everyone there. Thank you.

I look forward to the next. Nicky x

Comment is about Valerie Cook (poet profile)

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Thanks Jeff for commenting on my poem `Why`
Enjoying your recent change in style. Good work

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

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Thanks Nicki, for your comments on my poem `Why`, I am pleased you liked it.
Enjoyed the poems from your group on Sunday,also your debut at the Howcroft.

Comment is about Nicky Burrows (poet profile)

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Hi Nicky,

Thanks so much for your comment on "A Day in the Life". And am flattered by your suggestion to have it as commentary to a film clip.
I hope you have no need to work away these days.
Take care
x

Comment is about Nicky Burrows (poet profile)

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Hey Jeff, thanks for that comment om Pearl Stitch, really appreciated. I have written what I hope is a performance piece, which I am going to blog this time ( next one I will keep under wraps until I get the chance to perform it.) Would love you to have a look and tell me what you think.

Nicky x

Comment is about Jeffarama! (poet profile)

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Go on Nicks, you tell em.

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