Loved your comment Annipoo ;-) I am awake and I should be asleep!!
TC XX

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

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Thank you Steve for reading my poem 'Bound together'
and for your lovely words...

Francine x

Comment is about Steve Regan (poet profile)

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Thank you Sian, as always for your support and encouragement...
means so much!

Francine x

Comment is about sian howell (poet profile)

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Hi Mingo! Are you an anagram? It's always good to catch me on a jokey day - my default mode is 'Joyous Black' I'll pop over to your spot and make a comment. Cheers.

Comment is about Barrie Singleton (poet profile)

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Hi Kate, I love yer "Biscuit" poem - makes me mouth water!

Comment is about Kate Tym (poet profile)

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Hi Barrie, really enjoyed reading your poems - "Step Change" is me fave!

Comment is about Barrie Singleton (poet profile)

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Hello Oz
Enjoyed your spot last night at the Terrier, especially the one about the Stones (cold not rolling). Might make it to Harrogate next week - if so, see you there.

Comment is about Oz Hardwick (poet profile)

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Hi Neil, thanks for your nice comments on some of my poems. Glad to see you blogging! A good poem too.

Comment is about Nells (poet profile)

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Steve, my sincere apologies. I can't get through to you via the other channel. Don't know why. I have chosen to share through this medium. I hope I haven't overstepped.



Perspective

They
Think
I am on the outside
Looking in,
Beguiled by questions …
Scholarship … intellectualism …
Erecting barriers against the sleeping spirit.
But I say:
What a strange thought.

I live to learn,
And learn to live
With understanding,
In the constancy of Spirit:
‘Is … was … and shall be …’
There is no sleeping!
And I wonder why they peer at me
With murky eyes
As ‘through a glass darkly’.

But who is boastful?
Humility
Is essential
To Truth
And Love.
It is hard to eschew
A sense of superiority …
Easily the greatest Lie
Of all Lies.

Cynthia Buell Thomas

Comment is about Steve Regan (poet profile)

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Happy New Year Gaia
Your comment is much appreciated.
I will email direct re performing The Sun Shone.
Steve

Comment is about Gaia Holmes (poet profile)

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Hi Ann
Thanks, as ever for the word. Still haven't got back to the laugh-a-minute stuff yet.

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

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Hi John - re music for funerals! It's problematic choosing music for someone elses funeral. I had to make this choice, and of course it was at a time when you're in a state anyway. "Who Knows Where the Time Goes" seemed perfect, indeed it was, the result is I can probably never listen to it again. Also, cos of the words, we had "The Whole of the Moon" by the Waterboys. I had no idea if M liked that song, but the words summed him up, for me anyway. He was probably up there looking down and tutting! I think I'd like "I can see clearly now" by Johnny Nash, as it is so cheerful. But some bastards have recently used it in an advert, which is off-putting! I could go classical and have A Lark Ascending, bit of a cliche, but it is lovely. Re Nick Drake, it's another load of songs that I haven't been able to listen to for a couple of years, but I remember particularly loving Northern Sky. xx

Comment is about John Aikman (poet profile)

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Noticed that you are a Nick Drake fan (in another thread). He will be played at my funeral...along with John Martyn and Joe Satriani (it's 'one on the way in...one in the middle, and one on the way out...) although, if the rules permitted, I could easily have three from any of them.... It's a game we play on long journeys. My choices have been the same for many years.

What's your favourite?

Jx

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

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Hi Cynth.Yes email your poem inspired by "through the glass darkly"
stvregan@yahoo.com
I'l love to read it.

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

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Hi Cynthia
Comment appreciated.
As a voluntary worker in my local school, I often feel that parents are looking and wondering what an old gimmer like me is doing working with 6 and 7 year old children.

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

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hi there ann, i sure am keeping myself safe from my scarey thoughts ;)hehe

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

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hi there rachel, thanks for your comments on the "scarey thoughts" poem i thought i would get lynched for writing it ;)hehe

Comment is about Rachel McGladdery (poet profile)

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Steve, I am a crow's wing circle from Wigan, just around the corner in Sale, Cheshire.
And I too think that Biblical phrase is glorious. It was probably very influential. I have a poem based on it that I might share. Your work is very inspiring you know - or do you?

Comment is about Steve Regan (poet profile)

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I'm way down in St Agnes, north coast. And have no car, so difficult to take part in stuff. I believe that there's someting at the St Ives and Penzance Art Clubs every fortnight, am going to get a friend to take me sometime. Whether I am bold enough to take part, hmmmm, hopefully!

Comment is about Richard Thomas (poet profile)

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Hey, thanks for your comment. Where abouts in Cornwall are you? I am quite new to the performance poetry circuit. Just found this site today.
Rich x

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

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Hello and welcome - but I thought it was only women over fifty that were invisible? I like your poem, I feel that I can hear you reading it, or, that it would be great read out loud. (Is there a tiny mistake in the line "when there's nothing to say"?) Hope to see more!

Comment is about Nells (poet profile)

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Very welcome Richard - and I don't like tea either! I am interested that you hail from the west country. I am in COrnwall, I'm very new to writing poetry, never performed but hoping to. So much of this performance stuff seems to be oop north. Good luck with it all anyway!

Comment is about Richard Thomas (poet profile)

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Really liked your samples Andreas.
There are too many good lines to mention, but the last few of I came to fight are really strong "fists cut on daydreams" for example. Keep the words sharp, well done. Graham

Comment is about Andreas Grant (poet profile)

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Shards of spite and the grey dusty, grim musty silence are more evidence of your sharpening eye. However the use of single word lines twice......
Far
Too
Long

Together with the.......

Simple
Innocent
Laughter

...shows a really powerful emotional compass. I'm always interested in your work Sian. Well done again and keep them going. Graham

Comment is about sian howell (poet profile)

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Hi Rachel,

Thanks for the comment on my 'wall' or whatever I'm supposed to call it!

Interesting reading your stuff here. Hope you continue to get opportunities to do open mic and other performances - it's definitely a good way of getting your own 'voice' and meeting other people who enjoy the spoken word.

All the best.

Simon

Comment is about Rachel McGladdery (poet profile)

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I too have seen that very same barge... near to Stockton Heath...

Thank you so much for your thoughts

Augusta xx

Comment is about Rachel McGladdery (poet profile)

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Hello Sian
Thanks for your very kind interest. I am something of a reluctant blogger, having no great regard for what I do (not false humility).
I write to express those things that have passed through my mind (many and various), and if others find them of interest or enjoyable, I am both amazed and thrilled, in equal measure.
Steve

Comment is about sian howell (poet profile)

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Thanks Mark, no there's no more, I wrote it more or less on the spur of the moment, not having been on the site for a while.
Shame I've started the new year in Mr Grumpy mode!
I'm try ing to be more positive. will see what I can come up with.

Comment is about Horace Thespider (poet profile)

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oh! watch him Sian,that T.C.-he,s a wolf in young mens clothes-lol!-goodnight all.Mr.Wilde

Comment is about sian howell (poet profile)

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Hi Sian seems to take ages to get to the bottom of your postings ha ha.... thank you for the comment hugs are on me, I will send some positive Karma your way, Thaumaturgically Charged of course ;-)
TC XX

Comment is about sian howell (poet profile)

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thank you "Dancing in the rain" Jane !

very good your stuff

take care

Carmine

Comment is about jane wilcock (poet profile)

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Weaving your prose around the chords of Rachmaninoff? I expect your story to be quite a grandiose, maddening experience...

Comment is about Marianne Daniels (poet profile)

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Hello Sian HNY to you. Thank you for commenting on Happy New Year. I unfortunately was one of those in last night's clothes. Have just read The Long Fuse. Will comment after a couple more reads. Always necessary with your work. I'm looking for the clever bits that you hide so well. Graham

Comment is about sian howell (poet profile)

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Simon, I feel the pain of being ignored by Sir Jimmy myself, also having neglected to send in the letter asking to be a ballerina for a day or whatever it was. I did have him as a friend on myspace some years ago though.
I liked your samples a lot
Rachel
x

Comment is about Simon Lee (poet profile)

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Kealan, we're all 'fairly shit' -- in our own eyes or those of others, but so what. 'Poetry will teach you poetry' -- that's all we need to remember.

So the greatest tribute we can offer to each other is this, as from me to you -- 'Keep writing..you have something to say..'

Michael

Comment is about Kealan Coady (poet profile)

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thanks for your comment johnny

Comment is about John Darwin (poet profile)

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Hi Both, thanks for the welcome, looks like a really useful site.

Comment is about Ant Smith (poet profile)

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Hi John. Keep looking, keep blogging and we will keep reading.
Winston

Comment is about John Turner (poet profile)

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Hi Ant . welcome to WOL hope you like what you find here. Winston

Comment is about Ant Smith (poet profile)

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Hi Carmine welcome to WOL . good to see you are getting to grips with the various aspects of the site - have fun. Winston

Comment is about Carmine Grimshaw (poet profile)

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Hi Andreas.Hope you enjoy the site. Winston

Comment is about Andreas Grant (poet profile)

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..hello Ann..thank-you..I used the blackbird for two reasons..if 'man' disappears from the planet all the flora and fauna and planets will carry on regardless, they have no interest in any religion, and I've never seen a blackbird being instructed on how to build a nest, we don't understand how they know..therfore they are an obvious creature to take us by the hand and explain the universe, something no 'man' will ever be able to do.

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

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Hello again Cynthia
I suppose most of my poems are 'worked on' to some extent.
I write almost everything sat at my computer, generally arriving at a draft fairly quickly. I then let it sit, and generally keep returning to the computer over the next 24 hours and perhaps change the odd word or two, but the bulk of it remains. Fine tuning may be the best phrase, if that doesn't sound too up-myself.
Thanks for the message
x Steve x

Comment is about Cynthia Buell Thomas (poet profile)

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Hi Ann,
thanks for commenting with your thoughts on Snow People poems.
It's the kind of comment i was hoping for.
The first is my first draft and as it came out on paper. The second is when i started messing around with it. I'm hopeless at editing and often do too little or too much.

Janet.x

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

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In the preview section on this site, the poem shows in a different format than what is actually published. I shortened 'your' to 'ur' so that the sentence fitted on the correct line. That said, I bet e.e. cummings (no caps needed) would probably be well into text spk, not to mention ur instead of your. So I'm allowed too! As regards whether this poem would work more as a blog, I disagree - my style of verse is often conversational and short on the usual poetic gestures. It's just how I tend to write. I suppose the more laboured ones will come across more immediately as 'poetic.' Many thanks for your comments. I will check out your work soon.

Comment is about John Turner (poet profile)

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Hi John. I didn't notice any cliches in Left Over. Maybe this poemwould make a good blogg? Somehow it seemed hard to comment on the one you chose as it seemed more of a statement. Is "ur vicious" etc right or should it be "your"? Anyway, good poem I thought. And welcome too.

Comment is about John Turner (poet profile)

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Thanks Janet!

Comment is about Paul Conneally (poet profile)

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Hi Ann
Thanks for ever welcome comment. I've added an explanation comment, so those who read know exactly where I was coming from
xx Steve xx

Comment is about Ann Foxglove (poet profile)

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really?...nah no way, your boiling my sprouts as we say in Liverpool!

Comment is about jean lucy thompson (poet profile)

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Hya Rache - my grandma used to call me Fanny Fanackapan when I was little and being awkward! I want to be a hedge witch, got books about it and everything! When I wrote this poem it had a cheerful ending, "my love still has its fingers crossed" or some such rubbish, but then I woke up one morning with the miserable ending, which is better.

Comment is about Rachel McGladdery (poet profile)

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