<Deleted User> (7212)
Fri 7th May 2010 20:10
hi - 11am - many thanks. B
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<Deleted User> (7482)
Fri 7th May 2010 17:25
Hello rodney thanks for your feedback , lol
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Thanks Rodney...love 'horoscopes'!
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thanks for the comment over my latest poem, chuck. it is a bit off a surreal one, i must admit and isn't the clearest one of them but i always think it is good to confuse poets once in a while.
confusion rules! lol x
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Rachel Bond
Thu 6th May 2010 20:53
hi antony. thanks for comments on 'ferryman'...wild and unabridged yeh a bit like me then x
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<Deleted User> (8159)
Thu 6th May 2010 19:56
thank you for your comment! You are too kind. I am sure that even in these few lines i made a lot of mistakes. But thank you again! It inspires me to write more
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Andy, thank you for comenting on In Grip of Silence. Is one of my un-crypric pieces, not my usual style. Glad you liekd it as I wasnt sure about it really. It seemed bland for me. I love your work , Had a good look at some of it above. Love the animals in their bags and the private space. Animals in their bags is brilliant! reminds me of toting toys to school in my bag as a kid, childrens imaginations are great and will extend to infinitate possibility. So touching that you had your butties. Maybe the animals in the bags ate the other kids sandwiches...em
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Hi, Alison! Thank you for your comment on my poem "My wishes". Your poems are beautiful. With warmest wishes, Larisa
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If I could write a meaningful piece involving a picnic scenario believe me I would, hehe thanks for the comment man.
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It was missed bcause it was the last blog of April. Thanks for searching it out. winston
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Hi Anthony. thanks for the detailed observations. This story telling style is not a one I have used much. This was created in a poetry workshop which was refreshing, glad you liked
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Pete Crompton
Wed 5th May 2010 23:16
Hi Andy, thanks for your continued support and encoragement. I like your recent writings inspired by the paintings. Looking forward to catching on the scene soon.
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<Deleted User> (8159)
Wed 5th May 2010 09:18
thanx for your comment, Andy! Yes, the latest piece is the sad one, and it's very jumpy in rhythm and uneven, passable lines are not supported by rubbish lines, but i suppose every now and then everybody writes just "steam-out" piece :-) Hope your computer is fine by now.
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Arsony, arsony, it has to be arsony. Infamy, infamy, someone's got it in for you.
Can it possibly be true that you are cancelling the Bards? Couldn't it possibly take place on the ashes? Was amazed to read about it on the home page - let's hope the character isn't spoilt when they rennovate it.
Hope to see you soon anyway. Isobel x
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Rachel Bond
Wed 5th May 2010 01:58
hog...all awash with that same whiskey smelt welsh breath.
love it my brother.
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Rachel Bond
Wed 5th May 2010 01:40
hey john...new poem ferryman has to go in as its most gruesome thing.
ill bring it tomorrow.
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<Deleted User> (8159)
Tue 4th May 2010 19:16
thank you for your comment about my poi painting. As it happens i sometimes visit Hebden Bridge Trades Club and find atmosphere quite interesting!
YOu can find more of my paintings at my flickre page http://www.flickr.com/photos/35994202@N04/.
BTW was enjoying your poetry! X
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<Deleted User> (8159)
Tue 4th May 2010 09:05
Thank you for your comment, Andy ! ( somebody said that i should answer comment in profile rather than in the thread). What i absolutely love about this place - nobody said that it reminds Emily Dickinson ( practically the only poet that I know).Artists and amateur artists are not like that - if they give you a compliment it's always accompanied with "it looks like Degas( Monet, Soutine) :-)))
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Pete Crompton
Mon 3rd May 2010 23:33
Hi Isobel, thanks for your feedback and lovely words on 'Ankle Chain', means a lot that you liked it. x . Peter.
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Do you still Dib Dib Dib then Jane?
Thanks for your comment - glad you enjoyed it. Might try to make the Howcroft this month - it would be good to catch up. x
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Thanks for the link Ann - yes it did go on a bit - I guess sometimes you just have to be there! It is good to see old traditions being kept alive though. So much of our culture is now influenced by American TV.
I had a good bank holiday anyway - for once made a trip South that didn't involve painful traffic jams each way. Perhaps the bad weather put people off travelling!
Hope you had a good one. x
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I'm sorry for not giving you more notice about the new rules for WOLOP Cynthia - I just suddenly realised that there wouldn't be enough voters to run it properly this month. I would hate any effort you have gone to, to go to waste, though. Let me have the list of worthy poems you have already compiled and I will add them to the list for May - that way, they get to be highlighted and possibly chosen. Let me know about good May ones as you go along, then you don't have to trawl through at the end. I so wish we had another 50 site members like you - you have an enthusiasm and the commitment that I adore.
Isobel x
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Hi I hope 'On The Front' makes some kind of sense. I didn't realise it was such hard going! I like 'A Time That Glowed' a lot. The title for a start is intriguing and it's full of telling detail. The final couplet is very strong. Yes, great about he book and the fact I can draw a line under stuff that's been knocking around so long.
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<Deleted User> (8159)
Mon 3rd May 2010 14:04
thank you for your comment I suppose "seed of death" means all these things rolled in one. The poem is started as an answer to my friend , who is younger than me. But it can be interpreted differently
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<Deleted User> (8159)
Mon 3rd May 2010 11:42
thanx, Cynthia! yes, the picture is mine. I like to dance and meet lots of people who are ( whatever you call it - spiritual, new age, or gaia...Thank you for your comment! X
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<Deleted User> (7212)
Mon 3rd May 2010 11:23
"asparagus" Hi Cyn - and many thanks. No - I missed J-Lo on TV; she's lovely, but about as bright as a cheese sandwich though, but I'd forgive her that ;)
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<Deleted User> (7212)
Mon 3rd May 2010 09:38
thanks Cyn - "the glossies" = it's one of those with which I am quite pleased but most dont seem to "get it". B
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howya cynth, thanks for the comments again, i enjoy the fact you always question them, it gives me a chance to describe the content clearly, as reguards to decidious embracement, the general theme is the alienation of new begginings, decidious implys that every welcome eventually decays, i know that sounds horribly emo but i refuse to censor myself on the grounds of stereotype. I feel anguish belonged to the poet long before the emo and therefore we have the right to convey it without generalisation.
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Sorry that May Day celebrations have passed you by this year Isobel. Here in Aggie we have our Giant Bolster Pageant. I've given you a link but it does go on a bit!! xx http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YDrpsDTS3qY http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8v4yKUqFwls
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Pete Crompton
Sun 2nd May 2010 12:47
Jane, thanks you for your comments on 'happiness' x hoping you read it when needed!! thanx for spotting my sp's xx !! :0-(
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<Deleted User> (7075)
Sun 2nd May 2010 11:52
Hi Martin... Hope you enjoy looking round this website. Looking forward to seeing more from you. Winston
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<Deleted User> (7075)
Sun 2nd May 2010 11:46
Hi Tim. Well done in your 'come back' to performing. look forward to seeing more of your writing. Hope you enjoy exploring the WOL site. Winston
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Re: 'Cramping My Style'
I finally got to hear it Isobel!
I see what you mean now - kudos to John for making it sound so amazing.
xxx
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Ah, I see it now, Greg. I wonder if anyone else would spot that allusion without the explanation!It adds weight to the poem as well.
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thanks Cynthia for your comments they are much appreciated.
Dan
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<Deleted User> (6292)
Fri 30th Apr 2010 09:55
Oh Cynthia
Tongue swirling, how lovely.
Your comments and reply to my poetry are equally as tongue swirling.
Thank you so much for your very much appreciated support.
Augusta xx
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Glad you approved of A Time that Glowed, Win. I was anxiously awaiting the reaction of true northerners like yourself!
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Well, Stapleton can jolly well bog off then!! ;-)
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good to see you backand commenting A.E. Win
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Ta for your kind words, Ann. There was a pop song many moons ago that had a fade-out which included the lines "Keep on dreaming!" Wish I could remember who sang it.Maybe it'll come to me. * I prefer the romance of the north to the south. Mind you, I know there are plenty of windswept moors in the west country as well!
*Remembered it. Never Had a Dream Come True, Stevie Wonder
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<Deleted User> (7212)
Thu 29th Apr 2010 20:12
and you call that an excuse?? you'll never make Poet Laureate at this rate :)
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<Deleted User> (7212)
Thu 29th Apr 2010 20:04
Durr - now I feels a proper ijit.
I'll go & stand in the corner of the class where I belong.
No - I never did read it, but it certainly makes sense & your poem even more vibrant. Well done ! Your next mission - if you decide to accept it - is to write a limerick about Seaborgium - and no, I've not just invented it ! B
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<Deleted User> (7212)
Thu 29th Apr 2010 17:49
Hi Ann - MORE INFO - great poem - & I'm not just saying that because.....
BTW - nothing wrong with a little "doggy style" anyway if you get my drift :) Also - phosphorus for a hound of the baskervilles might have a certain "logic" anyway, because (pardon me if you know already) phosphorus glows in the dark - hence the name - so that'd be decidedly spooky at night seeing just 2 eyes bounding across the moors towards you !! I think that would certainly get MY attention :0
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Thanks for commenting on Phosphorous Cynthia. No, no sex with the dog!! I think the hound (dog indeed!) symbolises the man. And phosphorous a passion that can burn.
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Hi Cynthia It's starts off just being about a stroll along the sea front at Cleethorpes and walking past the corny illuminations, but it ends up being about my loss of religious faith. I was brought up as an Irish Catholic. I hope that makes some sense.
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Thanks for laughing-with. For your next imagining: 'Lunch with the man I never met'?
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Dad brought a tear to my eye. So tender and so true. It's tragic and hilarious and brilliant. Thank you.
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Welcome to WOL Martin. You'll get plenty of feedback here if you ask.
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Chris Dawson
Fri 7th May 2010 22:44
Thanks Andy, for your comments on 'Disconnected' - glad you like it.
Cx
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