ForeThoth

First page of my new book out soon critique needed 

 


1st page of my new book, critique needed, ty

 


ForeThoth

Suffering
like a flower you learn
to live with       it’s there,  you hear it
smell it         taste it              see it in
the careful patterns of people
whose wires work well

Suffering
and the parody of Paradise, of
false prophets, well-groomed
apostles and truth subscriptions

but you only ever cost yourself
and the price of the sacrifice is consent


you must consent to sacrifice your mind
before proceeding to read this manuscript
this is your only warning

The Trinity is Thrice Great
But the ALL is ALL
God Bless

Kealan Coady
3/3/2020

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kealan coady

Wed 4th Mar 2020 07:39

Thanq Po, that means a lot fren but I still dont even know how much I dont know lol

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poemagraphic

Tue 3rd Mar 2020 20:58

If only we could truly understand exactly what it is we so freely give away.

Forsooth it can never be taken... Thank God!

If we had to pay for this freedom we would never let it out of our sight or grip.

I wish you well in this your endeavour Kealan.


..."but you only ever cost yourself
and the price of the sacrifice is consent"

You have all you need
Po



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