Peat's Silent Secret (Guy's - I'm a newbie, feel free to comment and let me know what you think)
Peat's Silent Secret
An evil so dire
Now lies in a hospital bed
Time to dwell on thoughts
From the past, haunting
Behind the eyes
Of the near deceased
Her evil lover, still
As dire as always
No remorse nor care
For those who suffered
From their terrifying actions
Tearing apart their once happy lives
As dire as always
No remorse nor care
For those who suffered
From their terrifying actions
Tearing apart their once happy lives
A glimmer of hope
For she who searches so dearly
When a spark of good will
Appears in her black heart
Though not enough to be forgiven
For the terror they caused
For she who searches so dearly
When a spark of good will
Appears in her black heart
Though not enough to be forgiven
For the terror they caused
A mother’s tear, again
Is shed for her child
Long lost in the earth
Silent sobs from her heart
Shiver through her body
As she relives the horror story
Is shed for her child
Long lost in the earth
Silent sobs from her heart
Shiver through her body
As she relives the horror story
Searching, longing
For a thread of a memory
A clue, to where her angel lies
Silently, covered in cold peat soil
No hint from the wind
As it sweeps across the moors
For a thread of a memory
A clue, to where her angel lies
Silently, covered in cold peat soil
No hint from the wind
As it sweeps across the moors
Footsteps after footsteps
And still not a trace
Of the short lived angel
She once held in her arms
Years have past
Yet the pain is still deep
And still not a trace
Of the short lived angel
She once held in her arms
Years have past
Yet the pain is still deep
Desperate for a sign
Never giving up
Losing her mind with worry
Of never finding
What longs to be found
Waiting, lonely and cold
Never giving up
Losing her mind with worry
Of never finding
What longs to be found
Waiting, lonely and cold
Guided by his killer
Never allowing the memory
To die with the time
But lying there still
A love so dear
The moor's silent secret.
Never allowing the memory
To die with the time
But lying there still
A love so dear
The moor's silent secret.
Andy N
Thu 15th Apr 2010 08:17
good stuff, lucy... i showed it to a pal too - i'll give you full feedback when i speak to you next. considering in your own words - you are a newbie, it's a cracking start! (I'll show you some of the stuff I wrote at your age - yours is hundreds and hundreds times better) x