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The Attraction Of Tiny Petals

 

I'm loving learning from people 
but wouldn't dream of teaching them lessons.
Strange how they improve me yet
I wouldn't change them in any way. 
I'm not looking for the best way forward
just a way forward. Everybody needn't agree
or God forbid, all concur with me.
Although as far as ever from Utopia
progress is surely being made.

Thunderous footsteps. Giant, giant footsteps
reverberate across the horizon
recognise no borders.
I respond emotionally 
animals automatically do.
I have been busy
with this all-consuming drive
adding the final touches
to a small garden.
As king of the hill I can't be stupid, can I?
Expecting storms to arrive
I flick dust from a delicate leaf
as generations have done
unknown, unthanked, unrewarded.
Little enough survives but ever beautiful
if only a seed in the dirt.

◄ The Bad Artist

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Adam Whitworth

Sat 1st Feb 2020 18:27

I appreciate your considered comments as always Keith, Thanks very much.

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keith jeffries

Sat 1st Feb 2020 16:47

Adam,

A clever poem which merits a second if not a third read. "Although as far as ever from Utopia progress is surely being made". This resonates with me in times of despair. Franklin Delano Roosevelt, in a discussion with Churchill, brought up a teacher he had once known, who believed that despite war and the misery of the human condition, humanity was always moving forward, even if we cannot see it. I believe this and your poem expresses it so very well indeed.

Thank you for this.
Keith

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