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That Special Someone

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Warm kisses

mulled wine

 

for someone

so special

 

love wrapped

without strings

 

for someone

so special

 

kind thoughts

hugs given

 

for someone

so special

 

can't think

of anything - - -

 

more special

than you.

under the mistletoe I wait for you x

◄ A Krampus Wish

A Tall Glass of Yesterday ►

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Nigel Astell

Mon 30th Dec 2019 15:48

Eyes to the right
eyes to the left

it's that Don looking
what does he see?

might need bigger specs
but not quite sure

he is looking at
someone so special

so I have to say
his eyes seem o.k!

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Don Matthews

Mon 30th Dec 2019 13:28

Thankyou Nigel for your considering my eyes. You could have said stuff your eyes and commented thus:

Nigel!!!! Thalia here. WOL techs will not allow Don to zig-zag below as he was hoping. Seems the mods think he's taking too many liberties and putting a leash on him. We both know this will only have limited effect. So read on and apply a bit of LMS imagination

Thanks
Tom
Po
Do.RoTHy
Ruth
for your likes


but Like-Minders would never do that to each other.


Thankyou once

again. Thalia Lucy Ethel

Bert all thank you as

well......


blip.....blip Janet calling Nigel

... are you receiving me?..... ......if your eyes are

going all zig-zag wizzy-like you need to see

an eye doctor.......no Don is not playing tricks on you Nigel. This is for real. You're not playing around with Nigel's eyes are you Don?......

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Nigel Astell

Mon 30th Dec 2019 11:34

Thanks
Tom
Po
Do.RoTHy
Ruth
plus Adam
for your likes

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Nigel Astell

Tue 24th Dec 2019 11:44

Thanks Ruth

Thanks M C

still waiting under the mistletoe!

Don tell Ethel and Bert still working it out myself!

Happy Christmas to you all!

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Don Matthews

Mon 23rd Dec 2019 21:30

Woke up this morning Nigel and eyes doing this funny constant back and forth zig-zag thing. You will appreciate problem at breakfast. Optician narrowed it down to your pome. Janet did some fancy remote auto-correct for me to straighten things up but it's now upside down. But she tries poor girl No probs though Nige - I stand on my head.

Eff? Why doesn't he turn the 'puter upside down....

That is a very good suggestion coming from you Bert. Even I didn't think of it.......

(I take no responsibility for comments of Ethel and Bert. They have a right to their opinion, as do we all)

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Ruth O'Reilly

Mon 23rd Dec 2019 18:15

This is an exciting way of formatting a poem Nigel! I liked the line 'love wrapped without strings' for it's clever use of language.

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M.C. Newberry

Mon 23rd Dec 2019 18:15

As a film director might remark: "That's a wrap!"

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Nigel Astell

Mon 23rd Dec 2019 14:16

Eye tester for sure thanks Don

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Don Matthews

Mon 23rd Dec 2019 14:14

Nice Nigel.....(serious comment)

Also provided horizontal exercise for my eyes......(also serious comment)

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