A short study
studying her quiet face asleep,
i can only guess how
far she has travelled.
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NB. I think this is a haiku but as I am rubbish at counting the whatever's for it, I
am just gonna call this a short poem.
Comments
I agree :)
This is a lovely, intimate and inspiring short poem. IMO one of your best.
Regardless of any haiku definition (which doesn't matter IMHO) this is a fantastic thing. Win x
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Steven Dark
Fri 9th Apr 2010 15:37
Simply Beautiful.