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Inside a house

Dark outside,

you see inside.

I’m standing there,

without a care,

but looking out,

i’m full of doubts.

I’m projecting pride,

but have nearly died.

He makes my tea,

you see he loves me.

I appear to have done

nothing for it.

My inner voice,

gives me no choice,

where you can’t see,

I slice my extremity,

the blood runs down,

into the family’s dishes.

 

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◄ Common souls

You made me do it ►

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Ferris Ty Taylor

Sat 3rd Apr 2021 09:49

I actually gasped.

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Raj Ferds

Thu 28th Nov 2019 16:48

What a way to finish Emma. Bravo!

I get the impression that there areother enmotions deperate to get out. Was there reluntance??

Let's have some more.
Raj

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