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Hope

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By your breathless side I left my hope;

as the thick curtain closed and engulfed us,

our future frayed like a worn hemp rope.

 

In dark deathlessness I’m alone to grope

for a frail ribbon, my own dreams surplus

as by your breathless side I leave my hope.

 

Black is precise, but my clothing is taupe;

life’s fabric faded to washed out hues,

my future fraying like a worn hemp rope.

 

Reality with sanity elopes

and the meaning of truth is now veiled as

by your breathless side I leave my hope.

 

Destiny proclaims me as one who copes.

Crude stitches sew a patchwork life in place

but my future frays like a worn hemp rope.

 

Distance disappears through a telescope

and soon I won’t even see your face since

by your breathless side I left my hope,

my future fraying like a worn hemp rope.

loss

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Dave Bradley

Mon 5th Apr 2010 08:44

I enjoyed this Alison - the structure reflects the reflective mood and the nature of the perplexity. What is life without hope? Very well written.

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winston plowes

Sun 4th Apr 2010 23:44

Alison... fab this one. A strong rhyming scheme but not forced. Great Win :-)

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alisonsmiles68@gmail.com

Sun 4th Apr 2010 20:57

Sorry, I'm spamming a bit this weekend!

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Isobel

Sun 4th Apr 2010 20:18

Very sad but beautifully constructed and packed with original and very evocative imagery.

It leaves me wishing there was something I could do other than read and comment.

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