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Friends

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I love you more than I ever loved a woman

despite the distraction of your huge scary bosom.

You tolerate me at my most obtuse,

with my close to the skin miscomprehension of race.

 

Our friendship’s built on misunderstanding

where we compete for paucity of upbringing,

but I envy you and everything you are,

and when we link arms we travel so far.

 

Brown face, white face, I don’t understand

why matching smiles can’t countermand

the orders inculcated in frustrated minds

and why the history of mankind leaves us so blind.

 

We glare at each other in exasperation,

unable to vocalise our explanations.

Why do I think it’s you who has the colour,

and is this problem yours mine or ours?

 

Don’t try to solve it, it’s not an equation,

or look to soothe it like a recalcitrant emotion.

Some things in life defy resolution,

and if you can’t define the question there can be no solution.

◄ That is the shed

Hope ►

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Isobel

Fri 30th Apr 2010 22:16

John is right. Some poets are very good at putting words together that sound nice. Others are good at putting ideas together in a poem - expressing issues in new and novel ways. Lucky and rare are those who can do both...

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John Coopey

Fri 30th Apr 2010 21:29

I know what you mean about Augusta's stuff, Alison.
But you've no reason to be embarrassed by this - I think it has a perception that can only come from truly honest friendship.

Especially the bit about me thinking that it's you who has the colour. Thanks for this insight.

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alisonsmiles68@gmail.com

Sun 4th Apr 2010 08:28

Just dipped in and read yours, Augusta ... and feel ashamed to call mine poetry!

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Sat 3rd Apr 2010 22:05


Good Evening Alison

Rare and wonderful words...


Despite her huge and scary bosom

Augusta xx

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