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Strong Enough?

Strong enough to shed a tear of pain for another,

Strong enough to find no shred of shame in your tears,

Strong enough to honour your father and mother,

Strong enough to know the name of your fears,

Strong enough to stand alone in the maelstrom,

Strong enough to ask for help when it's needed,

Strong enough to recognise whence the storm hails from,

Strong enough to recognise when loss must be conceded,

Strong enough to keep your battered heart ever gentle,

Strong enough of mind to deeply understand,

Strong enough of judgement to never be judgemental,

Strong enough to truly call yourself a man.

◄ A Revelation

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Jason Bayliss

Sun 3rd Nov 2019 20:00

Thanks Jennifer, I really appreciate your comments.

J. x

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jennifer Malden

Sun 3rd Nov 2019 17:30

Couldn't agree more! Crying isn't a sign of weakness, definitely. Really moving poem.

Jennifer

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Jason Bayliss

Thu 31st Oct 2019 18:41

And that Don, is the absolute truth. I wear every tear I've ever cried as a proud reminder that, just like everybody else on this planet, I'm human.

J. x

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Don Matthews

Wed 30th Oct 2019 12:16

'Strong enough to find no shred of shame in your tears'


“Crying is not a sign of weakness
but a sign of strength to have the
courage to show deep emotion”

Maria O'Hare
Ireland

Said in relation to a society which says men shouldn't be seen to cry

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Jason Bayliss

Wed 30th Oct 2019 10:33

Thanks Keith, I really do value your opinion so I'm pleased you like it.

J. x

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keith jeffries

Tue 29th Oct 2019 12:55

Jason,

a poem which challenges who we are. It is a yard stick which is interesting to read in relation to oneself. A good piece of work and well thought out.

Thanks
Keith

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