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Anarcho-Haiku

The free market is trash

It will consume us all soon

Revolution now

Anarchistanti capitalisthaikurevolution

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Don Matthews

Sat 19th Oct 2019 15:37

So I can get away with my western 6-10-5. Yay!

I do remember reading a while back about what you're saying about the 5-7-5.....

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 19th Oct 2019 15:20

To be really honest the 5-7-5 is only a western interpretation of something that is almost impossible to replicate with our alphabet and lingual style.

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Don Matthews

Sat 19th Oct 2019 15:14

Haik rule is 5-7-5
Bending rules now. Here I go. 6-10-5
Much better. Am pleased..

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 19th Oct 2019 14:40

Easy.......just lose the ‘the’

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Don Matthews

Sat 19th Oct 2019 13:40

Worst follow rules? ...

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David Karban

Sat 19th Oct 2019 13:14

The best haikus bend the rules ?

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Don Matthews

Fri 18th Oct 2019 22:44

The first line is 6 syllables not 5 ?? 'Free market is trash' would make it 5. hence 5-7-5 pattern.

Is this what you are wanting David?.....

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