Crunches

Crunches

Bare feet
On thin ice

Over Arctic water.

 

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Fred Nicholson

Tue 15th Oct 2019 22:44

Thanks Michael.
I reflected on both meanings, the latter being more chilling.

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Michael Triandafils

Tue 15th Oct 2019 21:54

For me, this could be simple poem about a person walking over thin ice or it could be a larger poem about global warming. I liked it

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Fred Nicholson

Sun 13th Oct 2019 23:44

Thank you keith.

I also get a sense of fear when experiencing 'Crunches'. If you choose to, please share some of the other meanings that have come to you.

Your meanings may help to expand mine.

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keith jeffries

Sun 13th Oct 2019 20:52

Fred, I shuddered at this, but I also see other meanings, too many to mention.

Thanks
Keith

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