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Small Change

I hadn't thought much

about that one...

how the shadows

early morning

through the window

would change

if flat wall

were covered

with dark curved wood

but I watched

the leaves dance

on the grainĀ 

of the gentle arch

and though they

were less vivid

lightless silhouettes moving

across heart lines

and life lines

of the gentle hand

of an old oak grain

rather than

stark contrasts

against flat eggshell

of old wall

still the quiet-screened

puppetry

of their breezed dance

brought the peace

of home

to my heart

◄ Fall

The Visit ►

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Adam Rabinowitz

Sat 5th Oct 2019 18:34

Thank you, Rose and Lisa. Your words are very kind and affirming. Hope you have beautiful day.

Adam

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Lisa C Bassignani

Sat 5th Oct 2019 13:31

Beautiful indeed. The morning sunlight brings such wonder.

<Deleted User> (9882)

Sat 5th Oct 2019 12:13

it is my turn now Adam to be glad I logged in today.

One beauty of a poem!







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