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a Living Paradise

a Living Paradise

Paradise is being conscious of each breath
in out in communion with all existence.
More still, paradise is engaging
with energetic flow behind appearance.

Paradise includes all aspects of life and death
and storms and calm and sex and gender and butter
flies cats dogs goats eating grass and children laughing
crying and munching apples being loved in love.

Paradise is union with dark and day sun bright stars
twinkling at night. It's a mama bear clawing salmon
from rapid waters of crystal clear consciousness
and life and death supports love in action.

Paradise is a soup of wordless energies,
a merry-go-round with no tangential departures
or components needing replacement or repair.
Paradise is living reality outside the dream.

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◄ I feel . . .

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Fred Nicholson

Fri 25th Oct 2019 20:49

I whole heartedly thank you Keith.

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keith jeffries

Wed 16th Oct 2019 23:36

Fred,

This is an incredible poem. Line one of the last stanza is fantastic.I shall read this again and again.
Thanks for it and bless you
Keith

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Fred Nicholson

Wed 9th Oct 2019 00:11

Hello Candice,
Your impact-full compliment induced a rush of tingling chills.
I enjoyed visualizing the image compilation you presented.
I heartily thank you.

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Candice Reineke

Fri 27th Sep 2019 03:11

Fred, I read this three times. That’s how much I loved it. I can see these lines as vivid shots in a video - slow cuts building to fast cuts, each stanza a beautiful montage. Highly impactful piece!

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