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Charlie's story.

              CHARLIE’S STORY.

 

They seek him here, they seek him there.

They’re looking for Charlie everywhere.

Look up high, look down low.

Where he is, you’ll never know.

In the bushes, in the grass.

Charlie will creep, right up your arse.

Snipes from high up in the trees.

Or in a Bunker, on his knees.

You won’t find him, no matter what.

All you’ll do, is get shot.

 

Charlie is the master of disguise.

For your life, is his prize.

Charlie don’t want to get hit.

So he stays light, fast and fit.

Only eats rice and fish.

Out of a wooden bowl or dish.

Lives in the jungle or underground.

You’ll never know, when Charlie’s around.

You can’t smell him, see him or hear him.

When he shoots you, you feel him.

 

Charlie’s got nowhere to run to.

So he’ll stay and fight, until he kills you.

Charlie has no fear.

As we found out to our cost, year after year.

Very resourceful, with his booby trap.

Be very careful, when you squat to crap.

Check and search, around the grass.

Or a Pungi steak, might pierce your arse.

Watch very carefully, where you tread.

Or Bang, you’ll end up maimed or dead.

 

Charlie has no R&R, or weekends off.

He’s always there, just to piss you off.

When he finally shows his face.

It’s because he wants you to chase.

An ambush, is normally what he has in store.

Charlie’s there waiting to score.

He waits until you’ve nearly past.

Then shoots you all, and gets out fast.

Just like Phantoms in the night.

Charlie is very hard to fight.

 

By:- Mick Stewart.

◄ Children In Vietnam.

Bloods. ►

Comments

Emilia Callahan

Fri 27th Sep 2019 13:34

I like the juxtaposition of writing about something so serious, but doing so in a rhyming pattern. Most of this poem actually read to me like a Dr. Seuss book, so it felt playful, even though the subject matter was not. In that sense, it was almost like a song you'd sing to children as a warning to children about Charlie. Great work!

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keith jeffries

Thu 26th Sep 2019 18:17

Mick,

This poem about the enemy interests me as most wartime poets focus on their own side, their hardships and casualties or the injustice of war itself. As someone who fought during this conflict what motivates you to turn your attention to the enemy? Is there perhaps a degree of admiration for his skills or devotion to the cause? During the Vietnam war I was in the British Army serving in Germany contending with the Cold War but also living with a defeated people after the end of the Third Reich. In those days I did not write poetry but often wonder what angle I would have taken.

I like this poem and your style. It brings alive one of the worst post World War Two Conflicts.

Thanks for this

Keith

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