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Daylight Robbery

Daylight Robbery

 

Conformity robbed me of my personal freedom

it took away my ambitions and desires

My talents were ignored as if they did not exist

and I allowed this to happen under my very nose

 

Time has passed by for there can be no recovery

I am not alone by any stretch of the imagination

Conformity, fear, conventions and tradition

with their societal prejudices stifled my soul

 

I was never permitted to be the real me

others knew better and sculptured me in their image

I am the burnt out wreck of others ambitions

I am not alone in these thoughts and regrets

 

I see flowers bloom and then gracefully die

given only sunlight and water to nourish them

Seldom are they ever violated or brutalised

I never came to fruition nor ever bloomed

 

What is the price of true freedom

Why do others always seek to control others

to make them into something they are not

I am not alone, sadly many more do roam

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keith jeffries

Tue 1st Oct 2019 21:18

Jennifer,

Thank you for your comment. Not too late, but I do rather feel like an autumn bloom.
Thanks
Keith

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jennifer Malden

Tue 1st Oct 2019 19:51


Sad one this - conformity is often, as you say, stifling. Surely it isn't too late to recover something of what you feel is your real, authentic self?

Jennifer

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keith jeffries

Thu 26th Sep 2019 10:01

Desmond, Jon, Avishek, Don and Emilia,

Thank you indeed for your comments which I greatly appreciate.

Keith

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Don Matthews

Thu 26th Sep 2019 09:38

"The 'normal person' is what is left after society has squeezed out all unconventional opinions and aspirations out of a human being" (Mokokoma Mokhonoana)

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Jon Stainsby

Thu 26th Sep 2019 09:14

L'enfer, c'est les autres.

Emilia Callahan

Wed 25th Sep 2019 20:36

I like this one. I keep going back to line 6 - "I am not alone by any stretch of the imagination". Have you thought about expanding on the idea of conformity with society vs. the possibility of the imagination?

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