Ageless

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She looks in the mirror;

What does she see?

Hair stained grey by the cruel hands of time;

A face lined with age, worn past its prime.

 

He looks at her;

What does he see?

A crown of silver upon the head of a queen;

The face of the loveliest girl he's ever seen...

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Chrystel Roberts

Wed 18th Sep 2019 19:55

Thanks Keith...

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Chrystel Roberts

Wed 18th Sep 2019 19:53

Thank you Mae and Jason; I appreciate your comments.

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keith jeffries

Wed 18th Sep 2019 19:44

Chrystel,

As it is often said, "beauty is only skin deep".A poem which exposes a myth and so well written.
Thank you
Keith

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Mae Foreman

Wed 18th Sep 2019 15:49

Wow! This is lovely! Kudos! ?

Mae

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Jason Bayliss

Wed 18th Sep 2019 15:48

And there, my friend, you have hit the nail smack on the head. The silver crowned queen. I think as we get older our eyes get better at seeing beauty, we see beyond the depth of skin.

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