The Awakening

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(I have been urged by a dear, dear soul mate to publish this again. So here it is..)



Unhindered. Uncensored.

You speak of freedom.

But imprisoned within your prejudiced cell,

chained to your capitalist creed,

trapped within sexist differentials

drunk on delusion

Opinion coloured by your petty black and white dichotomies.

Then the grating sound of rolling gates

Grant you the gift of the golden key

to step out of your sickly skin, follow your heart and soar to your highest purpose.

Your spiritual awakening is just beyond those walls.


My Communal Dance ►


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Raj Ferds

Sat 31st Aug 2019 09:57

Namaste Mimi.
Your comments are flattering. May the universal life force flow through you and nourish you. Glad you have been able to embrace the poem.

Raj x

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Fri 30th Aug 2019 23:06

I can feel the emotion threading each line in this piece with a needle and crimson sew. The stark reality laid bare. Purged. Unmended and mended. Thank you for sharing such an exquisitely viscerally vivid piece. May your river pen flow eternal with creative endeavor. Blessings to you from the Universe ????

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Raj Ferds

Sat 24th Aug 2019 18:38

Thank you Devon, Rebecca and Adam.
My dear friend will be pleased to hear this.

Stay Blessed, all of you.

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