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D.I.Y An Unfinished Love Story

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Because it's Bank Holiday Weekend in UK and some guys like to start D.I.Y projects but don't have time to finish them.... 

 

You don't send me nice

Curtains anymore

I guess that's why

Love

Is blinds

Everything 

Including my heart

You

Interiorly Designed

You put the

Pain in

Paint

Waiting for

You

Is like 

Watching it

Dry

I think

We'll

Reacquaint

When 

You've finished

Your

D.I.Y

Poetry jokes

◄ Brother Leaf

You only see it when you slow down ►

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Adam Rabinowitz

Sat 24th Aug 2019 16:30

Don,

LMAO is laughing my ass off

I can't help occasional chaticonynyms

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Ruth O'Reilly

Sat 24th Aug 2019 16:28

Good one Nigel. From B & Q to BBQ

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Ruth O'Reilly

Sat 24th Aug 2019 16:26

Inter changeable humour Don, I think deep, then just rise back up to the surface and remember to smile at it all?

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Nigel Astell

Sat 24th Aug 2019 13:04

There is a Q
at B&Q
D I Y can wait!
giving love a chance
to get back
on track!

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raypool

Sat 24th Aug 2019 12:07

Another clever treat, and I see a parallel with the Brother Leaf in the presentation which seems to nicely wrap everything up, which you unfold and the message is within. A clear and inventive mind if I may say. (I felt the word wry coming on too!)

Ray

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Chrystel Roberts

Sat 24th Aug 2019 11:51

Nice humour, Ruth!

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Don Matthews

Sat 24th Aug 2019 03:03

You seriously funny or funily serious Ruth?....

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Don Matthews

Sat 24th Aug 2019 02:57

LMAO? Love making adults only? Love making Adam ohyea? Love making antic oneoff?......

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Ruth O'Reilly

Fri 23rd Aug 2019 23:49

Thanks Adam, well spotted that is my actual personality really humorously serious. I like what you're cooking up in the kitchen with your simmering pot poem there?

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Adam Rabinowitz

Fri 23rd Aug 2019 23:43

What I love about your poetry is that it is always meaningful but also has humor. Waiting to get back to the love stuff is like watching paint dry.?

I'm waiting for our love
to boil
I'm watching the pot.

LMAO

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