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A DAY IN THE LIFE

Me and Johnny Gold went to Julie's place to find Frankie.

He never knew we was coming.  We just wanted verbals

to see what his story was about the job at the jewellers

in Barnet, like why he was brought in behind our backs?

He was always a bit handy with shooters so we got tooled

up just in case.  Needn't have bothered - when we got there

he'd scarpered. Julie said she hadn't seen him for months

which was a porky as we'd already seen him in the Boulogne

in Gerrard Street with his hands all over a young dolly bird.

That was straight after we'd had a drink at the Old Blue Last.

Johnny wanted revenge for him coming on to his wife but I

calmed him down.  On the way back to Vallance Road we got

a pull from the law,  A brake light out apparently.  Freddie Foreman's

man had sorted out the service on the Humber so we had to

teach him a lesson for being sloppy and taking a liberty.

In the end it was a long day. We stopped off at Tubby Isaacs'

wet fish stall in Aldgate and rounded the evening off at the

Grave Maurice in the Mile End Road then Johnny showed me his

armoury in his gran's bedroom.  Quite a collection and designed

to wreak havoc. He could be a handful but totally reliable.  

We had a lovely cup of tea with her then we parted company.

I slept sound knowing there'd be trouble coming up next day.

 No peace for the wicked, said Johnny.

Stop it, I said.

◄ THE SANDS OF TIME

MY FATHER WALKS ►

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raypool

Thu 5th Sep 2019 12:07

Hi Jennifer. It's always a nice event when you drop by. You could be right about that but Americanisms are so ingrained that it's hard to see the trees for the wood.. whoops.

Ray x

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jennifer Malden

Wed 4th Sep 2019 19:39

Really funny Ray! Greatly enjoyed. Isn't 'coming on to someone' US English?

Jennifer

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raypool

Fri 23rd Aug 2019 23:01

Thank you Lisa so much . I love to bring a bit of variety to the table. Much appreciated.

Ray

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Lisa C Bassignani

Fri 23rd Aug 2019 22:43

Ray.
Fine work here. I love poems and stories like this.
Lisa

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raypool

Fri 23rd Aug 2019 22:02

Wolfie, have no fear, i'll be there. I'm aching to start. You're too kind, really you are. I'll be drifting down for a swift half or two .

Graham, you got me fair worried now. But I will face up to it, you know that. Cheers.

Adam, thanks for dipping and diving , I'm pleased you liked the old cockneyisms. I have read a few books by the elite of the breed and this is quite a mild version of some of it !

Rachel, I do take that point of course. I do like to open up a bit, and there's freedom in that. I'm happy you have backed me here, and of course entertainment is often uppermost in my mind!

Don, I take that as read. Aythangyo. Good of you to say so.

Mark, equally enjoyable comment! I read of Walter Probyn, and Cornelius Whitehead to give him his proper monicker. I can't remember whether he did time, but he was a Kray member as we know. Was he at the legendary party when Jack the Hat was topped? I got rid of all my books now. Thank you for sharing your memories! I had to go to Savile Row station once and found that quite dodgy - everyone had long hair and sideburns and big collars.

Thanks esquires for liking this: Kevin, Randy, Jon, Jonathan, and Devon

Ray

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 22nd Aug 2019 11:19

I enjoyed this piece of creative writing for all sorts of reasons Took me right back.
But hey, you didn't mention Connie Whitehead and that Jag that
he was so proud of. Or when Wally "Angel Face" Probyn and Beryl
had it on their toes from the Squad led by DI Forbes that time in Burdett Road and a local lad got in the way of a thrown police truncheon aimed at the escaping Wally, with Beryl shouting "Shoot
'em Wally" as they legged it up Pigott Street. ?
Those were the days, old son! Fair brought a tear to the eye.

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Don Matthews

Wed 21st Aug 2019 23:39

"not a poem obviously"

Wot? An excellent example of 'New-Age' poetry. Rhythm, scansion etc...got the lot. Perfectly acceptable on WOL.....

elPintor

Wed 21st Aug 2019 17:42

I don't care what it's called, Ray, it's a great piece of entertainment. Further, it's a prime example of why we shouldn't allow small minds to dictate a bunch of petty and subjective rules for all us proles to follow.

..a real fun read, Ray )

Rachel

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Adam Rabinowitz

Wed 21st Aug 2019 16:29

Completely out of my element here, being a yank, but enjoyed the adventure nonetheless.

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Graham Sherwood

Wed 21st Aug 2019 15:39

Expect Reagan and George to pay you a visit!

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raypool

Wed 21st Aug 2019 14:53

Forgive me folks for taking this liberty , not a poem obviously. Some might get the hump with me going on a bit, but there it is. Anything goes so I've been told.
PS All the names I've used are or were real places in the sixties.

Ray (Don't bother coming after me.)

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