Semi Tone

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Place the valve
of  your lip's 
and your smile's 
breath against 
my cheek and
breathe a note
to inform me
of its lasting
arrangement
and gentle
proposition.

While sighing
from within
you play now
the music's 
pressed tone.

 

 

words and music  T Carroll

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◄ As if to care

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raypool

Sat 20th Jul 2019 20:25

I'm always up for the musical stuff, and an image I had was a trumpet because of the word Valve which is also like another feminine word, to access which requires more than a sidestep.
It is a lovely lyrical idea and which works so well!

Ray

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Don Matthews

Fri 19th Jul 2019 23:31

Very interesting words and music Tommy.......

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Devon Brock

Fri 19th Jul 2019 21:56

Tommy, when I read the title "Semi tone", I am immediately thinking "half step". That smallest musical movement, imagined in a kiss, that gentle leaning in. Good stuff.

D

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