Learning Haiku Grade 1 - Sun Shines on Meadow
I'm new to haiku
Sun shines brightly on meadow
A load of crap Don
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Seems have wrong info
Rain pissing down on meadow
Right. Check data first
Don Matthews July 2019
Comments
<Deleted User> (22158)
Sun 14th Jul 2019 04:05
Great Haiku work Don
Sun will evaporate piss
Write more for us please
Thankyou kind words Lis
A. Middle line is seven
Sylls, my teacher say
Show you Deep Thinker he say....
Really Don? Come now
to Haiku is not that hard
Keep on keeping on
I all fired up now
Nought can stop me now Mindy
Don't rub salt in Grame
Here's a good Haiku for you Don................
223 all out
a poor show Australia
226 for two
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Don Matthews
Sun 14th Jul 2019 04:12
Need save up more dosh
Haiku lessons cost the earth
Jap masters not cheap
Will look at meadow
When sun next comes out to shine
Piss evaporate?
Must stop this drivel....
7...
5...
Must stop this d....