Learning Haiku Grade 1 - Sun Shines on Meadow

I'm new to haiku

Sun shines brightly on meadow

A load of crap Don

 

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Seems have wrong info

Rain pissing down on meadow

Right. Check data first

 

Don Matthews  July 2019

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Don Matthews

Sun 14th Jul 2019 04:12

Need save up more dosh
Haiku lessons cost the earth
Jap masters not cheap

Will look at meadow
When sun next comes out to shine
Piss evaporate?

Must stop this drivel....
7...
5...

Must stop this d....

<Deleted User> (22158)

Sun 14th Jul 2019 04:05

Great Haiku work Don
Sun will evaporate piss
Write more for us please

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Don Matthews

Sat 13th Jul 2019 14:35

Thankyou kind words Lis
A. Middle line is seven
Sylls, my teacher say

Show you Deep Thinker he say....

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Lisa C Bassignani

Sat 13th Jul 2019 12:24

Really Don? Come now
to Haiku is not that hard
Keep on keeping on

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Don Matthews

Sat 13th Jul 2019 11:00

I all fired up now
Nought can stop me now Mindy
Don't rub salt in Grame

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 13th Jul 2019 08:57

Here's a good Haiku for you Don................

223 all out
a poor show Australia
226 for two

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