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by ray pool
Thursday 11th July 2019 4:41 pm
We long to be free
my piano and me.
◄ WAITING - FOR URINATION
PARADISE LOST ►
Sat 13th Jul 2019 12:55
I'm amazed at the plethora of comments , thanks folks.
Jason and Mindy, thanks for adding to them with my offering as a trigger.
Devon, I do love a pun but they're generally frowned on, thanks!
Lisa, persevere but let it always be fun not a chore!
Martin i'll own up, I've no desire for the fray again. This was just a bit of frippery to be honest.
Don, it's annoying to think this works with hardly any effort, but that's often the way!
Hi David. Seeing that you have penetrated the mystery so well, I have to think this out - free of each other probably is right , as it was my master and servant at the same time, and was essential to earn a not always enjoyable living! But of course, we can't be free is we're wedded to an art and this can be one and give pleasure as we know. Frankly I didn't spend more than a second in writing it, so I'm perplexed about it's acceptance.
Thanks Cait for ascribing this as a poem. We are on the same wavelength.
Stu, I'll take that as a tick . Thanks indeed.
Hi Mark. That sounds like one of those easy to remember early lessons we used to take. There are quite a few to aid memory. Now I need all the help I can get!
Rachel, Mae, Sophie and Sognare thanks for the likes!
Don, now now! Can't have you getting inspired all over the place. Thanks for that.
Much to savour, thanks all!
Sat 13th Jul 2019 05:54
In a band it doesn't
Matter what key is played
Provided when they're playing
The key each play's not strayed.....
Sat 13th Jul 2019 02:10
Pianists see things in black and white
When they're seeking middle C,
But experience digital delight
Finding the key that sets them free.
Fri 12th Jul 2019 14:16
perfect length and depth my friend.
Fri 12th Jul 2019 07:21
A lovely little poem, says so much without saying much at all
Fri 12th Jul 2019 04:48
Of each other?
With your contested non-poem you have me pondering the concept of freedom and its many interpretations, does that lend the text a poetic quality? begging the obvious next question, which of course can only be answered by opinion, unless one is bound by literary rules confected by dull men in surly committees.
"Life is art" there you go, my contribution to irrelevance.
<Deleted User> (22247)
Fri 12th Jul 2019 00:38
Not everything is poetry.
Fri 12th Jul 2019 00:37
Perfect two-line poem Ray with rhythm and rhyme....
Thu 11th Jul 2019 22:12
I wondering whether there is still a desire to be back out on the road again. Or is this just a play on words
nice one Ray
Lisa C Bassignani
Thu 11th Jul 2019 21:25
I've been trying to learn piano...not necessarily my forte. Definately fun though and challenging 🎹🎵🎵🎶
Thu 11th Jul 2019 21:11
Ray, fabulous pun in the title.
Thu 11th Jul 2019 19:01
Oh, I don't know Mindy, I like a bit of vagary,
I think it adds to the mystery.😀
Thu 11th Jul 2019 18:55
I don't know your one word poem, Jason. Thought that meant a sprout or new growth...
But mine is absolutely not a poem! There needs to be a discussion. Not everything is poetry!
Thu 11th Jul 2019 18:35
I wrote a 2 word, "Short Poem," called Tempus Fugit, and then someone told me about a French one word poem called, "Pousse."
Once I understood the context of, "Pousse," it because a real favourite of mine, so I say, yes Mindy, it's a poem.
Thu 11th Jul 2019 17:26
Pee an "O," fart "A,"
Won't be the last I hear today!
Is this a poem?
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