This is a cautionary tale. Pay attention, please. Take heed.


she believes if she gives him what he wants

he will give her what she needs

she drapes herself in misery

fields sown with barren seeds

each morning when the sun comes up

she catalogues his deeds

dry promises that raped her soil

he digs until she bleeds

he finally crumples to the ground

there shall be no more thneeds


◄ disconnected

Winter Came ►


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Mon 1st Jul 2019 23:58

Very honest and visceral. ??

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Eiren Water

Mon 1st Jul 2019 23:41

Thank you Martin and Sophie
x x x

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Martin Elder

Mon 1st Jul 2019 20:25

There are some fabulous lines here that convey so much in a few amount of words.
Nice one

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Sophie Morley

Mon 1st Jul 2019 16:58

Excellent x

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