Afresh again

Starting the journey afresh

a zero point, a big bang,

an expanding universe,

the endless possibilities.

The long, soft puff of breath

spreading the bloomed spray

in a myriad of directions,

the unknown escaping

to sow itself into the lives

of the unsuspecting,

of the ones searching

for that, as yet, hidden pleasure

or thought lying at the bottom

of the deep well waiting

to be pulled up to the light.

freshnew

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Jon Stainsby

Fri 5th Jul 2019 10:11

I hope you do not mind if I put this in a single comment, but Ray, Graham and Jennifer, thank you so much for your lovely and kind words.

Jon

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raypool

Thu 4th Jul 2019 21:46

A mix of the celestial with optimistic outcomes makes this a really good poem for me Jon. It seems to have the essence of creativity at its heart.

Ray

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Graham Sherwood

Thu 4th Jul 2019 17:17

For me, easily the best piece you’ve written Jon. Good work. G

jennifer Malden

Thu 4th Jul 2019 16:54

Lovely and optimistic - the unknown escaping to sow itself ..........
Sometimes the unexpected does happen and can transform our lives for the better.

Jennifer

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Jon Stainsby

Thu 27th Jun 2019 18:11

Rose, thank you. ❤

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Rose Casserley

Thu 27th Jun 2019 17:36

For me Jon I found this whole poem so delightful and especially in the way it warmed up from the fifth line.







Rose ?



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Jon Stainsby

Thu 27th Jun 2019 17:19

Thank you, Jason

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Jason Bayliss

Thu 27th Jun 2019 14:54

What an eloquent journey of thought summed up perfectly for me by the lines,

"the unknown escaping

to sow itself into the lives

of the unsuspecting,"

Unsuspecting, but eternally grateful.

J.

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Jon Stainsby

Thu 27th Jun 2019 10:46

Thanks, Dorothy.

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Jon Stainsby

Thu 27th Jun 2019 10:22

Thank you, Keith

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keith jeffries

Thu 27th Jun 2019 10:09

Jon,

A deep and thought provoking poem of renewal. These words will speak to many in their various predicaments. I enjoyed this greatly.

Thank you
Keith

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