cosmic fuck poem

the search for god becomes a suffocation 

stab the fat star spill yolk across the sky 

yellow a scream across the de-tuned darkness 

touch my lips, breakdown this sunset songbird 

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Stu Buck

Sat 11th May 2019 16:51

thanks both! glad you enjoyed it

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elPintor

Sat 11th May 2019 16:37

It's great when you use color this way--like it was plucked right out of a scene in a film.

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Wolfgar Miere

Fri 10th May 2019 21:08

Hi Stu,

The second line has me visualising an animation by Terry Gilliam, very surreal in thought and artistic in its construction. As ever a vivid imaging from you Stu, It also reminded me of my breakfast.

Of course the search for god is suffocating, apparently there are around 60,000 gods. If people ask me if I believe in god my first question is, which one? quickly followed by a resounding no.

I do like the one with the Elephants head though, and anything with multiple arms appeals.

David.

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Stu Buck

Fri 10th May 2019 16:03

thanks keith, thats bang on what i was going for so great to hear thats what you took from it

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keith jeffries

Fri 10th May 2019 14:43

Stu,

This sent my mind into a flurry of thought. I had to read it several times. It has a profound quality which provokes many images.The opening line struck me as I find the search for God frustrating and almost unachieveable. An excellent work and thank you for this.

Keith

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Stu Buck

Fri 10th May 2019 14:19

thanks tom! lovely to see you back here

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Tom Harding

Fri 10th May 2019 12:12

Awesome

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