cosmic fuck poem

the search for god becomes a suffocation 

stab the fat star spill yolk across the sky 

yellow a scream across the de-tuned darkness 

touch my lips, breakdown this sunset songbird 

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Stu Buck

Sat 11th May 2019 16:51

thanks both! glad you enjoyed it

elPintor

Sat 11th May 2019 16:37

It's great when you use color this way--like it was plucked right out of a scene in a film.

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Stu Buck

Fri 10th May 2019 16:03

thanks keith, thats bang on what i was going for so great to hear thats what you took from it

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keith jeffries

Fri 10th May 2019 14:43

Stu,

This sent my mind into a flurry of thought. I had to read it several times. It has a profound quality which provokes many images.The opening line struck me as I find the search for God frustrating and almost unachieveable. An excellent work and thank you for this.

Keith

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Stu Buck

Fri 10th May 2019 14:19

thanks tom! lovely to see you back here

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Tom Harding

Fri 10th May 2019 12:12

Awesome

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