Colour - Black

Although you are

in essence an absence

you are always deliberate,

mysterious and silent,

a shadow following,

a shade from the sun,

impression gives colour

but you remain intact

with none.

colourblack

◄ Monsters in our midst

The drunk and the priest ►

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Jon Stainsby

Wed 24th Apr 2019 15:19

Thanks, Jennifer. If I may say so myself I like that line, too. ?

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jennifer Malden

Wed 24th Apr 2019 15:07

Small and perfect - in essence an absence- one of your best I would say.

jennifer

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Jon Stainsby

Wed 24th Apr 2019 06:42

Thanks very much to everyone who liked this.

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Jon Stainsby

Wed 24th Apr 2019 06:41

Thank you, Ray.

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raypool

Tue 23rd Apr 2019 17:45

Highly effective Jon. I like that you havn't strayed into good and evil, the usual suspects, but stayed into defined limits.

Ray

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Jon Stainsby

Tue 23rd Apr 2019 17:01

Thank you, Jason

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Jason Bayliss

Tue 23rd Apr 2019 15:45

Really like this Jon, a real pleasure to read out loud.

J.

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Jon Stainsby

Tue 23rd Apr 2019 13:05

Thank you, Steve.

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