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Hold me while I fall apart

the little things I say as we sit by the waterside 

my memories start to slip away like the waves up on the bay 

 what is he who comes to my side?

all the bad things start to fade away 

take it away I say as he holds my hands

broken dreams, making plans 

hold me I’m falling apart

this feeling surely cannot last by the waterside  






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Jason Bayliss

Sat 9th Mar 2019 09:00

It makes me think of letting go of things that you don't want to lose, but can't possibly hope to keep, in the comforting arms of someone you truly trust. Really thought provoking.

J. x

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Erin Cc

Sat 9th Mar 2019 07:19

I agree with Katie the opening line is powerful and begs you to keep reading!

<Deleted User> (19913)

Sat 9th Mar 2019 05:55

Hold me while I fall apart... Such a powerful beginning. Alive with vulnerability and the trust it takes to allow someone near while it happens.

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