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Blood Pressure

 

My blood is

under a lot of pressure

it's tense since

it cannot always perform

all that it is asked to do

it becomes red with anger

and spills if pricked

if transfused from a bottle

it hangs there on a pole

like a trophy for the staff

there is good blood

and bad blood among peoples

and the taking of it

can be hurtful

depending on the nurse

and the fee from

the doctor.

 

 

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<Deleted User> (19913)

Tue 5th Mar 2019 11:06

I've seen it Don and D and you have cracked me up. Great bloody Poem.?

d.knape

Tue 5th Mar 2019 09:54

A poem is an offering
like a small host of bread
a taste of more coming
to a place in your head,
why waste a treat passing
your option instead
is to consume it, assuming
the poem is truthfully said.


dk

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Don Matthews

Mon 4th Mar 2019 13:17

Please no-one else comment just yet
Wait till I've logged out, in bed
Then you can out O-neg our Sir Keith
Time to log off, enuf said ?

Think I've said this before ?....

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Don Matthews

Mon 4th Mar 2019 13:13

Sir Keith I bow down to your Bloodline
When spilt out does it persevere blue?
A true indication of aristocrat lineage
(Or something wrong with your biology too?)

Golly gosh! O Neg that's fantastic!
Only Royals have this type I believe
You better stay 'way from the blood suckers
Who'd suck you all dry - and then leave ?

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keith jeffries

Mon 4th Mar 2019 13:00

dk.,

I enjoyed this poem but I have a slightly different problem as my blood is blue which speaks of an aristocratic lineage. I am also O Neg which causes me to be in high demand.

Thanks for this

Sir Keith

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Don Matthews

Mon 4th Mar 2019 12:55

Like you I think your poem's outstandish
If mine was as reddish as yours
I always have sweet nursies doin' it
So extraction is never a bore

I just get to logout dk
And your new one just comes on my screen
I was just gonna quit and go and lie down
Damn,gotta respond, say I've seen

I can see Kate, she's smiling in icon
Smiling at blood, pricked and red
Like her I think you need chat nursies
Time to fin, have enuf said ?

d.knape

Mon 4th Mar 2019 12:28

Outlandish!

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