Blowing hot and cold

The wind that shakes the barley,

Was once fierce ' wild and strong.

 

The wind that shook the barley,

Blew rampant all week long.

 

The wind that shakes the barley,

Whistled its very own song.

 

The wind that shook the barley,

Left nothing standing still.

 

The wind that shakes the barley,

Can Help you up ' many steep hills.

 

The wind that shook the barley ,

Can whisper what you please.

 

The wind that shakes the barley,

Could drop you to your knees.

 

The wind that shook the barley,

Is to be admired as you breathe.

 

The wind that shakes the barley,

Blows effortlessly amongst the trees.

 

The wind that shook the barley,

 will leave nothing in its place.

 

The wind that shakes the barley,

Can leave teardrops on your face.

◄ Mistaken

We are all apart of art ►

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lisa donohoe

Fri 8th Feb 2019 00:29

Its always nice to see you dropping by with your extremely nice positive comments jay, always appreciated 😃
Thank you ..
Tomorrow I plan to read the kids your poem about bestfriends. I loved the message and wisdom it spoke, your extremely creative well done 😃

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Jason Bayliss

Thu 7th Feb 2019 21:47

Love it, skilled repetition, almost chant like 😀

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lisa donohoe

Thu 7th Feb 2019 20:59

Much appreciated Mae 🌷

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lisa donohoe

Thu 7th Feb 2019 20:59

Thank you Steven 😃

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Mae Foreman

Thu 7th Feb 2019 20:27

Incredible!!! Wow!
Thank you🎈
Mae

steven arthur

Thu 7th Feb 2019 18:40

excellent repetition!

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