Being Good


My wife makes me promise

to be good

if you're good she says

I will make you enchiladas

both occurrences

are extremely rare

her making enchiladas

and me

being good.


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jennifer Malden

Sat 2nd Feb 2019 18:28

Nice! Agree with Ray - very enjoyable.


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Sat 2nd Feb 2019 16:20

because of the neat and clever structure this reminds me of an enchilada sandwich. I hope you enjoyed writing it as much as I enjoyed reading it.


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M.C. Newberry

Sat 2nd Feb 2019 15:44

Hah! Is the promise worth the sacrifice? In short...
There may be more in being bad
With all the fun and drink to be had! 😊

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