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Neurons Are Like People

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Neurons Are Like People

 

At times my mind is like

A whirling swirling storm

Neurons doing what they want

(I know this 'aint the norm)

 

A mind that stays in norm-mode

Has neurons that obey

Directions from their master

And don't stray too far 'way

 

But neurons are like people

They want to do their thing

But if they're too directed

New things they cannot bring

 

Give them a little freedom

And let them go create

Without a leash around them

To stop them deviate

 

Don Matthews June 2018

 

 

 

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 13th Dec 2018 18:48

The mind moves in wondrous ways. But having read this again -
why not "creating" and "deviating" in the final verse? Just a picky-picky grammarian feeling tense, that's me. ?

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Don Matthews

Thu 13th Dec 2018 09:30

Thanks Kate. You understand. Unleash the mind and see what it brings back ?

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Thu 13th Dec 2018 09:19

Love this one Don. Your neurones are clearly creative, free spirits. ?

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