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false start.

Draw too deep breath.

Linger too long.

take back   break

   neck  speed  one

 two  don’t   stop ask

 once    no twice

Forget.  

    Slowly.

Forego solid food.

Count to ten.

  hold on   elastic pill

     tight  stretch

     release      sharp no time

fixing not broken not ever

emotional poetryfree expressionfree verse poetrysad poetry

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ha'azinu

Tue 4th Dec 2018 14:13

Thank you to Martin and David for reading! 😃

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Martin Elder

Tue 4th Dec 2018 11:06

I like the fact that the sparseness of words offset in the type makes this work. Though Like David I am not absolutely sure what this is about

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Wolfgar Miere

Tue 4th Dec 2018 09:44

I have nothing to say, but am sufficiently curious to ask what this might be about Ha'azinu.

David.

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