It was exquisite,
A satin finish
Like lightly oiled plasticine
Not quite gloss
Just enough lubrication
To leave a fraction of friction
So the frisson
Of it’s exit was palpable
Turd doesn’t cover it.
A light tan,
And tapered towards the end-
Natural
Not snapped off
Before it’s time.
It smelt of Indian
But merely a hint
The spice lent by transmission
Only.
A good relationship covers all subjects. Absolutely hilarious.
Tee hee! Glad you all enjoyed my crap sense of humour! (snigger)My other half was appalled when I said I'd put this on here, bless him, he's mortified that you all know he does poos now!
Ta fer the comments and jokes,
Rachel
xxx
<Deleted User> (7212)
Sun 24th Jan 2010 20:11
this blog is really going down the pan
Love the title and the humour - just up my street... So this is what you produce when you involve a man in the equation - I should have known it! x
The next time I go I will be anticipating the fraction of friction with some trepidation. Well done Rachel, I'd like to say it was a stinker but I guess you had to be there. Graham
<Deleted User> (7212)
Sun 24th Jan 2010 16:52
Holy shit batman - quick pencil & paper...... I feel a blog coming on
<Deleted User> (6895)
Sun 24th Jan 2010 16:30
So this is what is has come to!-MY SAINTED AUNT!already she is heading to the futt of 'ar stairs.And as for my flabber?-its never been so ghasted!I see you are quick to shift the blame McGladders!almost amounts to being shit on.Beautifully disgraceful!I shall only speak to you in future,when obliged to thank you for commenting on my poems regarding each one as werk of 'eart! good read Rach-albeit with hand over schnozz!-Stefanitelynotnicexx
This was a joint effort between me and my other half (he provided the subject matter):) I didn't see it by the way, it was merely reported to me! I'm not THAT odd!
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Dave Bradley
Wed 27th Jan 2010 11:26
Enjoyed this Rachel. Good fun and some cracking phrases. Takes it one stage further than my 'Softer', which was a crap poem compared to this.