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bodies in free fall

blow me a kiss

as we converge...

 

cancelling all earth's gravity,

all that touches me is the wave

of your body falling ever closer to mine,

 

forever separated by infinitely smaller increments

of universal space and time.

 

 

◄ unbroken (a timeline in prepositions)

red sun ►

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Jezer Urena

Sat 13th Oct 2018 06:13

I will be. Thank you.

elPintor

Sat 13th Oct 2018 04:03

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=S-I8qpUpeYs

The written piece is much a product of the former--I can stake no claim.

Big Sal

Sat 13th Oct 2018 03:48

Perfect title, each word holds significance to the piece at hand, and the metaphysical aspect is mind-blowing.

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elPintor

Sat 13th Oct 2018 03:10

Hablo, un poco..very kind of you, Jezer.

I very much enjoyed "reset"--I hope you'll keep posting.

Rachel

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Jezer Urena

Sat 13th Oct 2018 02:54

Inteligente y profundo

elPintor

Sat 13th Oct 2018 01:51

..just a thought on some recent viewings of certain documentaries which very much lead me to believe that our educations are truly incomplete.

Rachel

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UroPqMsr3UU

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