unbroken (a timeline in prepositions)

return to that place?  I'll return only

to find what was once lost and

to fix this broken part of me


--that which was broken

to make what never was and

to pull down shade screens formed

to blind the penitent to newly ordered crimes--


and to forever fix this rift between the fixers and I.

◄ portfolio--modern treatise/old idea

bodies in free fall ►

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elPintor

Wed 10th Oct 2018 00:23

Ray, I'm happy to know that it sparks any thought at all--you definitely couldn't be wrong. Our minds are all so unique and there is great beauty in that.

Thank you. And thanks to you too, David and Becky.

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raypool

Tue 9th Oct 2018 21:29

This is really a tricky one Rachel - as is a series of blind alleys awaits in the past, and someone at fault that puts you where are now. That's the best I can do.

The very best as always Ray

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elPintor

Tue 9th Oct 2018 15:11

Thanks for reading, Sal. I don't want to give the impression of being unappreciative--I need encouragement probably as much as anybody. Often, I feel a bit too paralyzed to say much of anything. As much as I try to get around that, I guess I just need to accept it as part if me.

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Big Sal

Tue 9th Oct 2018 02:46

Sometimes I don't say anything for fear of wearing out my welcome with too many 'excellents' or 'great pieces' said, but you truly raise the bar with the poetry you write.

It's always a treat to read.

😁

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