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i.m. Pte Jack Prince

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As the light fades ever faster,

And the temperature drops

– I am recalled

To this dialogue with the dead.

My grandfather, Jack, had his

Last pint of mild in this pub

I am sitting in before

Embarking for France in 1914...

And his first one back in September 1918:

2018 Jack - alive in my heart - always known, never seen -

Not a line of his writing have I , not a wisp of his hair

Now be-suited businessmen and women sit there

Sit playing with their phones,endlessly twiddling.

They wouldn’t know a pint of best mild

If you threw one in their well-scrubbed

Faces.  Sometimes I am possessed by

Jack’s spirit: his anger at injustice and his ability

To see through hypocrisy and gob-shitery. Fuckery

Of all sorts and conditions, by all sorts and conditions...

When the day fades into night...

And I'm free at last

To see into the past

With Jack's multiplying eye.

 

 

 

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John Marks

Wed 26th Sep 2018 22:09

Thank you MC for your sincerity. John

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M.C. Newberry

Wed 26th Sep 2018 16:06

Words from the heart that embellish a memory that will
live as long as our debt to those men is remembered and
acknowledged. The accompanying video was new to me and was perfectly "in tune" with this blog.

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John Marks

Tue 25th Sep 2018 23:19

Thank you Keith. By accident or design if Jack hadnt managed to survive four years in France - which not many infantry did (he was a machine gunner) - I wouldnt be here writing this. Though Jack survived, a whole generation of young men were lost to the gene pool. We are the poorer as a result. John

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keith jeffries

Tue 25th Sep 2018 20:49

John,
This is a first rate poem and appropriate as we move toward the anniversary of the end of that terrible conflict. It is a poem which provokes a great deal of thought.
Thank you for this
Keith

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