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To the sun, we are veiled

It's the moon that sees our face.

Concealed, deep in every soul

Is a part of us; we deny to embrace!


◄ Forever Gone


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Mrinmoy Dey

Wed 19th Sep 2018 12:03

Thank you, sir, that you liked it.
I don't know how and why, but I write and re-write a poem, for hours, in my mind, untill I reach a point where I feel that I won't be able to make it any shorter in any way without compromising the feeling behind it. That's the part when I decide to pen it down.
Sometimes, it even take months.
In the end, I think its worth that effort... ?

I read your blog, there is so much content that I decided to follow you, so that I can come back and read some more. ?
Have a good day, sir!

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Stu Buck

Mon 17th Sep 2018 11:05

says a lot in a few words. the true art of poetry i think.

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Mrinmoy Dey

Sat 15th Sep 2018 19:45

Thanks for the appreciation, Keith.
I am glad that you liked it.
Have a good day...

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Mrinmoy Dey

Sat 15th Sep 2018 19:34

Thanks Brian.
This poem can be interpreted from multiple perspectives. I tried to keep it that way, so that a reader can relate it to them in their own ways.
The title says, Disguised!! Its meant to be veiled! ?
Just kidding!?
Have a good day!!!

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keith jeffries

Sat 15th Sep 2018 19:24

Words to ponder on with clever use of imagery. Thank you for this. Keith

<Deleted User> (18980)

Sat 15th Sep 2018 19:17

Not quite sure what it means but I like it. Love the image too.

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