temporary insanity
What gives
Me the right
To be so fucked up?
What happened
To me
That I am so fucked up?
Why does
Everything hurt
Who can
I trust?
Nothing.
No one.
Everything.
Everyone.
What gives
Me the right
To be so fucked up?
What happened
To me
That I am so fucked up?
Why does
Everything hurt
Who can
I trust?
Nothing.
No one.
Everything.
Everyone.
Very powerful snappy monosyllabic emotive language here.... Very raw emotions....superb work..! Love the structure
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Big Sal
Mon 3rd Sep 2018 19:13
That first stanza, I often ask myself the very same question when confronted with it on the page or in person. Great, concise piece reverberating with emotional output.?