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Beautiful raindrops

Dropping silent raindrops into your hair

Watching them slowly roll down onto your face

while the sun adds its rainbow tint

to their beaded form.

 

Crying is my best answer to this beauty

Smiling is the response to my tears.

beautyraindropsTears

◄ View from on High

A flower in bloom ►

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jennifer Malden

Tue 21st Aug 2018 16:54

Beautiful writing!

Jennifer

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Tue 21st Aug 2018 07:29

Oh WOW Jon

this is lovely!

The last two lines - what a beautiful sentiment!

cheers

DJB

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Taylor Crowshaw

Mon 20th Aug 2018 19:05

Full of emotion beautiful. Thank you Jon ?

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Jon Stainsby

Mon 20th Aug 2018 18:47

Kind words, Big Sal. Thank you.

Big Sal

Mon 20th Aug 2018 18:34

Line by line it unfolds like a scroll containing long-forgotten information. Well done Jon, it's good for being so short.?

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