Funny - but not ha-ha - how time slips away,
Dismissing each second, each hour, each day.
All we can do is make sure we play
The game life allows
For as long as we stay.
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A short piece of verse full of body,well done
Thank you, one and all, for the comments and the "likes".
I kept it brief to match the sensation that time itself
can so often appear so.
<Deleted User> (19421)
Fri 27th Jul 2018 07:36
Top marks!
Very good
cheers
DJB
This reminds me of some verse I wrote a while ago
Gotta get it out
Time's running out
All the things I want to say
Gotta get it out
Gotta get it out
Time's running out
Emotions churning round inside
Gotta get it out
D?
This poem is short by your usual standards Mark but incredibly effective. I would almost say it was quite wistful.
Nice one
<Deleted User> (19836)
Thu 26th Jul 2018 19:23
Short, sweet and to the point. I love it!
<Deleted User> (18980)
Thu 26th Jul 2018 17:19
There's no present Mark...only past and future.
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M.C. Newberry
Wed 1st Aug 2018 15:19
Thanks, Hugh. Appreciated.