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New eyes

reading texts
Writing hollow letters 
It's no easy quest
Looking for depth
Real emotions hiding behind
Dull sceneries
Describing your garden
As a mourned person
Or tears with no reason to be
I long for the joy
That two words can provide
When combined
But mean nothing alone
Looking for depth
Is no easy quest
Especially when the world
Is full of hollow things
To find meaning
You need to find yourself
Loose your senses to be able to see
The new world
A world full of empathy
 

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racha chafik

Mon 16th Jul 2018 22:10

i really love ur comments keith

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keith jeffries

Mon 16th Jul 2018 22:09

A poem of real profundity. I am becoming a fan.
Thank you
Keith

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racha chafik

Mon 16th Jul 2018 21:39

thanks collin

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Mon 16th Jul 2018 20:47

lovely poem Racha. Thanks for sharing. Colin.

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racha chafik

Mon 16th Jul 2018 20:34

thank you so much shalom i think that really

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Shalom Jordans

Mon 16th Jul 2018 20:25

hi racha thank you very much for an inspiring poem finding ourselves is key

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