Am at a park,wondering why me ?

what did i do wrong

i tried to be perfect for you 

i tried to be just and worthy of you

but it was not enough 

like i was not your desire 

like your mind was not here with me

i felt lost and deep in thoughts 

scrambling, looking for answers to all our questions 

questions only you can answer 

make me understand what is going on

Every step i made, seemed wrong to you

i began to question myself

questions, like what caused all this pain and reproach towards me?

like what are your thoughts towards me ?



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<Deleted User> (24283)

Mon 29th Jun 2020 14:31

Beautifully sad. Sometimes there are misunderstandings created by others. Nothing is wrong, just people around are wrong. They have their hidden agendas.

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Shalom Jordans

Tue 28th Aug 2018 14:33

thanks you so much Jane?

<Deleted User> (19836)

Tue 28th Aug 2018 14:29

Shalom, what a heartwarming piece; lovely.?Jane

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keith jeffries

Wed 4th Jul 2018 17:02

Than you for this poem. I like the style and sensitivity of your writing. More???

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