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Reminder

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She disappears far into the distant skies.
Day becomes night, for 14 hours she flies.
And with every hour, further we're apart.
I now count the days, with a heavy heart.
Sometimes a reminder a man might need.
A wake up call, I think this is mine indeed.
A blessing in disguise this period could be.
I might realize how special you are to me.
So until that plane returns in 4 weeks time.
I'll tell myself, I'm so lucky that you're mine.

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Mike Bartram

Sat 9th Jun 2018 09:05

Thank you for reading and leaving a comment, much appreciated.

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Don Matthews

Sat 9th Jun 2018 01:53

My first reading of this Mike followed Hannah's thinking. When I noticed the end-word rhymes I thought hello there seems to be something else going on here. A couple of re-readings revealed a rhyme structure I had been missing. Well done

Don

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Fri 8th Jun 2018 20:36

A plane taking someone you love so far away.
A shared experience.
So well described.

Hannah

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