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Stockings

 Not of the Christmas variety though....

 

 

 

The feel and the scent.
Stretching
the fabric over my fingerends.blunt.
It makes softer
it blurs out any flaw or indiscretion
it smooths and glistens.
A striptease in reverse
I unfold my leg to the pointed toe
and roll it on up in a sinuous embrace.
 The business end, pulling taut the sticky rubber button and dressing it in nylon and clipping fast the snap.
then back to Egypt.
head over my shoulder, the slightly blurred and vacant gaze as I tweak my seams admire my shapely calf and thigh and ankle.The tilt of my chin, the dark blue point of my unfocussed eyes, my hair falling over my forehead.
I see how it elicits want, how my finger's unconscious fumble stirs.
 Such a sensuous occupation
such a reverie in lingerie
 a delightful thing to take such pleasure in
To hold myself,to dream and drown in the scents of the underwear drawer the cold coal scent of lace,crackling, the sharp freeze of satin and the warm rubber smell of intimate pink nylon.
Such sex I shall have in these stockings.
I shall keep them on.

 

 

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Jeff Dawson

Sat 23rd Jan 2010 23:02

And why not! Ha, great stuff and very saucy! Good stuff, only one thing, only my opinion but it might have read better (for me anyway) if the longer lines were chopped up, but its your poem and theyre your stockings! Jeff

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Tue 5th Jan 2010 17:41

what else can a real redblooded man say but,PWHOAR!!!!!!!!

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winston plowes

Mon 28th Dec 2009 23:17

Hi Rachel. After reading the last two of yours I thought I would go for the hat trick. great again! I was in those stockings.... er ...em I'll get my coat. win

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Sun 20th Dec 2009 19:44

Wonderful.. every pull and stretch and knickery moment...really superb.

I see how it elicits want, how my finger's unconscious fumble stirs.
Such a sensuous occupation

Augusta xx

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Anthony Emmerson

Sun 20th Dec 2009 12:30

Indeed, "such a reverie in lingerie."
When will the video be available? ;-)

Regards,
A.E.

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Graham Sherwood

Sat 19th Dec 2009 22:21

Crikey???

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Isobel

Sat 19th Dec 2009 19:59

I'm just following Ann around cos I'm lazy like that. Another super poem though.- great use of language - I'm putting those stockings on with you! Love the ending also - sensual but not overdone. So good to see a felmale tackle erotica - so subtly done...

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Ann Foxglove

Sat 19th Dec 2009 19:48

A cooly sexy poem, you are your own voyeur. Some unusual descriptions (of the lace and satin particularly) make it more interesting too.

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