I spent
My last $20
On you.
I hope
You like
What I got you.
I know
They're not
The nicest ones there,
But I,
Wanted to show
That I was thinking bout you.
I know that,
Times have been
Tough for you,
And I
Know that this
Wont make everything right.
But I've been thinking bout you.
And with
Every petal that falls
I hope you
Know that it's
Every thought I have bout you.
Yes I
I love you.
If it's dedicated for your mom and the moms out there, especially the distant ones..it's beautiful. Either way it's brief but beautiful
@wood
Oops. Totally meant petal. I should take more time proof reading. Thanks!
really like the poem.
did I cross the wrong word peddle or petal?
enjoyed thank you kindly.
This has not only a good sentiment behind it but also the type of rhythm to it that could be a song.
Nice one
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Sofia Urquiza
Wed 6th Jun 2018 00:41
*to your mom ?